Writing CA1 Review

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She had to be very still the doctor gave her little shots in her finger.

What revision is needed to the sentence?
2.
4 points
Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees.

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
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Whenever we did put her outside, she didn’t try to escape or get out anymore.

What is the BEST way to rewrite the idea in the sentence?
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4 points
She was a year old before we learned about her unusual skill.

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4 points
The festive orange fruits they are a familiar symbol of the fall season.

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4 points
Others, however, is enormous.

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Their clever idea gained the attention of several reporters.

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4 points
I can’t say that I was sad when the beekeepers left with there boxes.

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4 points
And brought her inside and made her a house dog.

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4 points
Within a few days a new hole would appeer.

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4 points
One boater commented “It’s something fun to do with pumpkins other than carve them.”

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4 points
Businesses are decorated with them and schools, too.

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4 points
Do you think the concrete kept Rosie in our backyard.

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4 points
He then climbed inside he made his way across a lake.

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But after a minute Cameron couldn’t even fell it when the doctor touched her finger.

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16.
4 points
The workers had a special vacuum it sucked the bees into a box.

What revision is needed?
17.
4 points
It must have been hard to dig through the dry, packed dirt
under there.

The meaning of the sentence can be improved by changing THERE to —
18.
4 points
On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.

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4 points
My mom desided to call some local beekeepers.

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20.
4 points
The nurse in the emergency room studied the cut careful.

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4 points
Dr Wong carefully sewed up the cut.

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22.
4 points
How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!

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4 points
It will then climb onto the branch, and it is in search of insects and also other small creatures to eat.

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4 points
Cameron doesnt usually cry, so the tears were a bad sign.

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4 points
They wore special hats and thick nets. The nets covered their faces.

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences?